罐头水果生产

题目

The diagram describes the production of canned fruits. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

流程概览

该流程共 14 步：采摘 → 运至工厂 → 挑选 → 称重 → 清洗 → 冷藏 → 去皮 → 切分 → 加入水、果汁或糖浆 → 密封 → 烹煮/杀菌 → 冷却 → 包装 → 运至超市。

范文

The illustrations present how canned fruits are produced.

Overall, the canned fruit process undergoes fourteen steps, from picking the fruits to the canning process itself, until the fruit jars are ready to be sold at the supermarket.

The first step is to harvest the fruits from the trees. Once gathered, the fruits are transported to the factory where only the best fruits are selected and weighed to ensure they are suitable for canning. The selected fruits are then washed and kept in a refrigerator until the next part of the canning process begins.

To create the jars of preserved fruits, the fruits are removed from the storage, peeled, and sliced. The fruit slices are then placed in a jar containing either water, juice, or syrup, depending on the fruit and the objective of the manufacturer. Once the jar is full, it is sealed and then cooked to sterilize the contents so that it lasts longer and no one gets sick when eating the finished product.

After sterilization, the jar is allowed to cool down before it is packed together with other jars. These are all then transported to the supermarket to be purchased and consumed.

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衔接表达

• The first step：引出第一步
• Once：一旦……
• then：接下来
• After sterilization：杀菌后

词汇

• undergoes：经历
• harvest：收获
• select：挑选
• suitable：适合的
• slice：切成薄片
• objective：目的
• sterilize：杀菌
• preserved fruits：罐头水果

可学习句型

where 引导定语从句

Once gathered, the fruits are transported to the factory where only the best fruits are selected and weighed to ensure they are suitable for canning.

现在分词短语作状语

The fruit slices are then placed in a jar containing either water, juice, or syrup, depending on the fruit and the objective of the manufacturer.

so that 引导目的或结果状语从句

Once the jar is full, it is sealed and then cooked to sterilize the contents so that it lasts longer and no one gets sick when eating the finished product.

写作提醒

• 流程图通常使用一般现在时和被动语态。
• Overview 写起点、终点和总步骤数；主体段按前后阶段分组，不需要逐图逐句翻译。