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超市商品类别比较

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题目

The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

图表信息

  • 图表类型:饼图
  • 时间:2003 年与 2013 年
  • 对象:某超市五类食品的销售占比
  • 主要趋势:两年中蛋白质食品合计均为 60%,植物性食品合计均为 40%;肉类在 2013 年成为销量最高的单一品类,鸡蛋占比下降最明显。
食品类别 2003 2013 变化
Meat 21% 25% +4
Seafood 19% 21% +2
Eggs 20% 14% -6
Fruits 15% 17% +2
Vegetables 25% 23% -2

范文

The pie graphs display the percentage of food products in a particular supermarket that were sold in 2003 and 2013.

Overall, buyers opted to purchase protein products more than fruits and vegetables. Meat was the favored protein at the end of the period, while shoppers preferred vegetables more than fruits.

In 2003, the supermarket sold more protein products (60%) than fruits and vegetables, which was a combined 40%. The buyer preference between the three protein options was not that far, differing only by a percentage point each, with meat (21%) leading the way, followed by eggs (20%) and seafood (19%). As a product category, vegetables, however, did have the highest percentage among the five classes of food sold at 25%, while fruits had the lowest percentage of sales at just 15%.

A decade later, overall percentages of protein and plant products sold remained the same at 60% and 40%, respectively, yet there were slight changes in each food category. Meat (25%) was still the preferred protein option, but it was also the most purchased type of food in 2013. Seafood, however, was now the second favored protein product, while only 14% of the items sold in the supermarket were eggs. Despite a slight drop in percentage, shoppers still bought more vegetables (23%) than fruits (17%).

(215 words)

衔接表达

  • Overall:引出概述内容
  • however:引出转折
  • yet:引出转折
  • respectively:分别地

词汇

  • opt to:选择
  • protein:蛋白质
  • favored:受到喜爱的
  • combined:总计的
  • lead the way:领先
  • category:种类
  • plant products:植物性食品

可学习句型

that 引导定语从句

The pie graphs display the percentage of food products in a particular supermarket that were sold in 2003 and 2013.

现在分词作状语

The buyer preference between the three protein options was not that far, differing only by a percentage point each.

过去分词作定语

... while only 14% of the items sold in the supermarket were eggs.

写作提醒

  • 饼图优先比较最大、最小类别以及总体分类占比。
  • 对两个年份的数据,先找“不变的总趋势”,再写各类别的小幅变化。